Been a while since I’ve done this. Nobody reads them anyway.
I like this song it’s really nice to listen to vocally and the piano in the background emphasises the voice work really well. The tremble in his voice also just sounds so perfect, as if he’s recording on a chilly winter day. Really great job, I hope can’t see why this song in particular never made it into an album, and yes I am aware of “I’m Gonna Win” by Rob Cantor, but for me the lyrical changes in that song are just a downgrade in comparison. It changes the mood to a more positive aura, where as this version seems somewhat nostalgic which I prefer.
The ELECTRIC part of this electric demo is a great addition and turns the song more into a piece of music than just singing, which is why its also an improvement over the Pingry EP version.
I can’t be arsed to type more out now, it’s really late (2am) and I’ve said enough, just listen to the song its good:
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